The foal in the wire by Robbie Coburn

Dedicated to ‘those who are wounded and surviving’ Coburn’s gentle and emotive verse novel shares intimate feelings of loneliness and soul-searching in a way that allows readers to empathise and grow with him towards a better understanding of self and one’s place in the world. The verses tell the story of a young person caught in the middle of his parents’ arguments, as they grieve the loss of their elder son, horribly thrown and stomped by a bull. Grieving himself, Sam feels unloved and unwanted. It is only when an equally troubled young neighbour calls him to help save a seriously injured foal caught in barbed wire, that he makes a connection outside his closed world and gradually develops a relationship that frees him from victimhood and builds his self-esteem.

The verse novel comprises poems that could stand alone, but each adds another chapter to the story, simply written and expressive, telling of two teenagers who, in caring for the foal and gaining its trust, come to trust and care for each other as well. It is first young love between two bruised souls, enabling them to find their inner strength and a path towards a better future.

Whilst the themes include family violence, depression and suicide ideation, it is written in a way that that arouses compassion and empathy, the main focus being on saving the injured foal, an animal that would usually be shot to save its suffering, rather than slowly nurtured back to good health. The writing style is simple and direct, easy for young readers to engage with, and appreciate. It is an achingly beautiful story. Robbie Coburn is clearly an author to watch out for; don’t miss this one. Teacher's notes are available.

Themes: Coming of age, Grief, Domestic violence, Depression, Self-esteem, Love.

Helen Eddy